I still have enough poetry books on my shelves to make it to the end of the month choosing a book and sharing a poem from it, but I'd like to change it up a bit and share a poem I wrote about April.
Morning Run in April, Interrupted by a Sudden Sound. . .
Three geese,
photo image created on BeCasso from an original by J. Doolittle |
dipping tails into
a pond of pigment,
rise,
and with broad strokes
paint sky where there had been none.
More join the canvas
Adding clouds
and trees--
budding and expectant.
I forget to watch my feet.
Two robins,
Draw a solid stripe across my path
And settle on the grass,
Green, without a doubt,
Their shadows.
Jean Doolittle, 1995
I wrote this while I was in a poetry class and it benefited greatly from the critiques I received. It began overly verbose and sentimental, but we found that the heartwood was good and pruned it to discover the proper form and shape. I hope you can feel some of the magical transition that can happen only in spring; a transformation of the land, the life upon it, and ourselves, if we simply open ourselves to the experience.
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